When
it comes to children and Common Worship, I believe there's a need for a
reboot (switch off and start again) of Collects and Post Communions. My
rebooted prayers sit next to my work Redubbing existing Collects and Post Communions.
The principles for rebooting are similar to those for redubbing:
The principles for rebooting are similar to those for redubbing:
- Gender neutral and inclusive language;
- Great simplicity;
- Reduction in use of metaphor;
- Earthing the text: i.e. making sure creation gets a look in;
- Making them prayers for as many possible, not just those in church;
- Keeping children and empowerment as the primary focus.
The prayers will appear on this blog, ideally, at least a few days before the
following Sunday so that people who feel compelled* to bring a bit of
equality theology into their worship can.
Having tested the original and my redubbed prayers against the Gunning Fog index for readability, I realize the original prayers have such high reading ages i.e. the number of years of formal education required to make sense of a text on a first reading. For example, 40+ years of formal education is needed to understand the Collect for the First Sunday of Advent at first glance! When I redubbed that prayer it was still inaccessible to a child wasn't possible (I got it down to about 10+ years). It was time for a reboot!
I'm hoping that what I write will be useful for children and for child spirituality practictioners. I hope it will be a prompt, too, for those working to design liturgies so children can understand a fair amount a first hearing.
If you want to use* the prayers, an acknowledgement of myself as author
and, if there's space, the url to my blog, would be much appreciated.
* CofE clergy who have taken a vow of canonical obedience
may recall that using non-authorized Collects at a CofE Eucharist as
'The Collect' is not authorized (in a typical, church, non-ecumenical or
non-LEP setting). CofE clergy may also recall that it's optional as to what
Post Communion prayer is used at a eucharist. [CofE clergy may not be
aware that an authorized Post Communion can be used instead of a Collect
since it is an authorized prayer.]
2 comments:
I've just found this as a result of your letter in the Church Times. Just what's needed! Well done.
As it happens I'm one of your predecessors. Lived in 119 from 1985 to 1991.
Thanks Jonathan for your encouragement, much appreciated. Yes I'm conscious that you were here (and one of you family dropped in to see how it looks now a year or two back)!
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