Friday, May 17, 2013

Pentecost, Collect (Children's Reboot)


God you are
like a bright sun
that always shines.
Thank you that
you have sent your
Spirit to be like a
bright light in our lives.
Help us notice
your love, like it is
shining out from
all of us and the world.
Amen.

The Gunning Fog readability index suggests 5.87 years of formal education is required to understand this prayer on a first reading, the Common Worship prayer requires 31.69 years.

Here's the information on how this prayer is a reboot.

My collection of five Pentecost prayers are here.

You can also look at the full Index of Prayers.

The project runs from Advent 2012 to Advent 2013.

If you want to use the prayers, an acknowledgement of myself as author and, if there's space, the link to my blog would be much appreciated.

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